At the first sight
What catches your attention when you meet somebody at the first time?
I think a good hard honest handshake and how does he/she look like. what kind of hairstyle does he/she have, what kind of clothes does he/she wear, how tall is he/she, is he/she very handsome or beautiful Their body language. How do he/she stand? Where is her/his hands? Where does he/she look at? Does he/she smile.
What do you notice first about a person?
I think I notice the same things I wrote earlier.
What do they have to be like to keep you interested?
I think they have to be fun. I mean they can't be too serious. If they are speaking about something I think they need to know about that subject and not just tell something that they have made in their own mind. And last but not least I think it's not very interesting to listen to them if they repeat themselves.
How well can you trust first impression?
Everybody can lie. You must remember that. Somebody can act really kind and nice but later he/she can be something else. Remember sometimes people are what their first impression says.
What catches your attention when you meet somebody at the first time?
I think a good hard honest handshake and how does he/she look like. what kind of hairstyle does he/she have, what kind of clothes does he/she wear, how tall is he/she, is he/she very handsome or beautiful Their body language. How do he/she stand? Where is her/his hands? Where does he/she look at? Does he/she smile.
What do you notice first about a person?
I think I notice the same things I wrote earlier.
What do they have to be like to keep you interested?
I think they have to be fun. I mean they can't be too serious. If they are speaking about something I think they need to know about that subject and not just tell something that they have made in their own mind. And last but not least I think it's not very interesting to listen to them if they repeat themselves.
How well can you trust first impression?
Everybody can lie. You must remember that. Somebody can act really kind and nice but later he/she can be something else. Remember sometimes people are what their first impression says.
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Vanhimmat
Mikä oli tehtävänanto? Mikä kurssi on kyseessä? (Jos olet jo viimeisillä kursseilla, virheiden kanssa pitää olla paljon tarkempi kuin ensimmäisillä kursseilla.)
Tässä kuitenkin yleistä kommenttia ja muutamia yksittäisiä pointteja tekstistä:
Älä käytä he/she-"pronominia", se on kömpelö ratkaisu, "a good hard honest handshake" ei sekään ole korrekti rakenne. Välimerkkejä on jäänyt pois sieltä sun täältä ja teksti on etenkin ensimmäisen kappaleen lopussa kömpelöä ja siinä on myös jonkin verran ihan suoranaisia virheitä. Lyhyet, katkonaiset lauseet eivät yleensäkään sovi englantiin ja ainakin korkeita arvosanoja tavoitellessa kannattaisi käyttää ns. sidesanoja. "I mean" ei tässä yhteydessä (3. kpl) sellaisenaan sovi, käytä muuta rakennetta, seuraavan virkkeen loppuun kuuluu fraasi "made up".
Korjasin nopeasti löytämäni virheet
At the first sight
What catches your attention when you meet somebody for the first time?
I think a good honest handshake and what does he or she look like, what kind of hairstyle do they have, what kind of clothes do they wear, how tall are they, are they very handsome or beautiful and their body language. How do they stand? Where are their hands? Where do they look at? Do they smile.
What do you notice first about a person?
I think I notice the same things I wrote earlier.
What do they have to be like to keep you interested?
I think they have to be fun. I mean that they can't be too serious. If they are speaking about something they need to know about the subject and not just tell something that they have made up in their own mind. And last but not least I think it's not very interesting to listen to them if they repeat themselves.
How well can you trust the first impression?
Everybody can lie. You must remember that. Somebody can act really kind and nice but later they can be something else. Remember that sometimes people are what their first impression says.
Tälleen nopeella vilkasulla poistin pahimmat virheet. Jos haluat lisää avustusta niin kannattaa jutella opelle siitä, että miten kannattais kirjottaa esseet. Tuosta vikasta lauseesta en kyllä ole varma unotuiko siitä sana not? Eli Remember that sometimes people are not what their first impression says.
kiitos vastauksista ja en kopio korjattua tekstiä, koska se ei ole omaani. Korjailin vähän tekstiä ja otin vinkkejä. kiitos.
Jos todella jätit kopioimatta: loistavaa!
Meinasin korjata itsekin omaan viestiini koko tekstin, mutta sitten päädyin vain antamaan yleisluontoisempia neuvoja. Näin kuitenkin opit paremmin loppupeleissä. Tai no, ainakin tuo on omakohtainen kokemukseni.