I test speak English.
I have idea for new "Suolistostory". Its like Star Wars and something like that. So this story begin when communist empire wants attack in earth. But, they dont know. They arch enemy, Raippari will save the world. Trotski the leader of the communist empire will fight and beat the Raippari. Raippari have hes own spaceship, and Trotski have spaceship too. So this is biggest war on the hole world!
Trotski have many many troops, but Raippari have something what Trotski not have. Loyalty, love, brains, skills. Raippari is magical rainbow girl, and Trotski is just sad communist.
Have they more problems? Yeah, Raippari is not only problem in Trotski. Because there is one more empire. Mustache empire, Mustache empire leader is "Israel supporter, "mustache cowboy". He have secretary Ebzu. Hes true love is Kurpizza, Kurpizza mades cookies him.
Problems pile up. Trotski have now two enemies. Trotski doest not have secretary or helper. He say "I dont need dumpy trivias!" Trotski is not so brainy leader.
When war starts, Ebzu IT (Fin) secretary will fall in love with Raippari, the leader of Rainbowship. Raippari has a powerfull Rainbow sword, he is really good use for that. He also have powerfull magic.
Thinks get weirder, when Ebzu get to know Raippari is hes cousin. Raippari has crush beautifull blue gold princess. Bluewing! Bluewing is married with Biologinalku. Biologinalku like Bluewings beautifull wings. I also forget tell you that, Biologi has he own empire. And Biologi like much butterflyes.
But thinks go weird, when Biologi fall in love with Herra X. Herra X is Raippari empire swordsman "black knight" Herra X is also gay. Biologi and Herra X relationship is not that eesy.
Who really save the world? Coming soon.
I have idea for new "Suolistostory". Its like Star Wars and something like that. So this story begin when communist empire wants attack in earth. But, they dont know. They arch enemy, Raippari will save the world. Trotski the leader of the communist empire will fight and beat the Raippari. Raippari have hes own spaceship, and Trotski have spaceship too. So this is biggest war on the hole world!
Trotski have many many troops, but Raippari have something what Trotski not have. Loyalty, love, brains, skills. Raippari is magical rainbow girl, and Trotski is just sad communist.
Have they more problems? Yeah, Raippari is not only problem in Trotski. Because there is one more empire. Mustache empire, Mustache empire leader is "Israel supporter, "mustache cowboy". He have secretary Ebzu. Hes true love is Kurpizza, Kurpizza mades cookies him.
Problems pile up. Trotski have now two enemies. Trotski doest not have secretary or helper. He say "I dont need dumpy trivias!" Trotski is not so brainy leader.
When war starts, Ebzu IT (Fin) secretary will fall in love with Raippari, the leader of Rainbowship. Raippari has a powerfull Rainbow sword, he is really good use for that. He also have powerfull magic.
Thinks get weirder, when Ebzu get to know Raippari is hes cousin. Raippari has crush beautifull blue gold princess. Bluewing! Bluewing is married with Biologinalku. Biologinalku like Bluewings beautifull wings. I also forget tell you that, Biologi has he own empire. And Biologi like much butterflyes.
But thinks go weird, when Biologi fall in love with Herra X. Herra X is Raippari empire swordsman "black knight" Herra X is also gay. Biologi and Herra X relationship is not that eesy.
Who really save the world? Coming soon.
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Vanhimmat
Interesting, but won't write too much about Biologi and butterflies.
Interesting. Write the story.
I don't know. Maybe it gonna be interesting, but I don't understand english that much, that I can say, is it or not.
In english:
Well... You don't speak very good english, but story sounds pretty nice. Maybe too complicated, but it would be nice.
I don't even know, how good is my english, but I tried still. :D
Suomeksi:
No... Et puhu kovin hyvin englantia, mutta tarina kuulostaa melko hienolta. Ehkä liian monimutkaiselta, mutta se voisi olla hieno.
En edes tiedä, kuinka hyvää oma englantini on, mutta yritin silti. :D
You haven't seen a really complicated plot in suolistotarina :)
Why it's me? Why not Pofuksio? She loves you. And I don't think Biologi is gay.
(Kirjoitan nyt suomeksi, kun en näin syvällisesti osaa englantia)
Mitä, olenko minä mukana tarinassa!?? En sisäistänyt tekstistä suurta osaa kielen takia, ja osaa, koska on huono päivä, eli tekstien sisäistäminen on normaaliin hitaaseen verrattuna vaikeaa.
Haluaisiko joku selittää suomeksi, mistä tuossa aloituksessa on kyse? Oikeastaan muuta en saanut irti, kuin sen, että suolistotarina, jossa on Trotski.
Että star wars tyylinen tarina jossa minä rakastun Rapeen ja älyämme olevamme serkuksia.
Tämä tunne... Minä en saanut mitään irti englanninkielisenä... XD
Sounds cool! But I've watched only one Star Wars movie so I don't get all the references...
Sounds interesting. Now you have to write it. :)
(I don't write much, because my English is horrible. But I understand it much better than I can write it (hope so).)
Ahh, right in the grammar! D:
(If you don't know the meme I'm very dissapointed on you.)