A withering breeze, tells shadows to lie.
Darkness to come, and children to hide.
If you hold your soul dear, don't look into the black.
It's subtle at first, but she's looking back.
What does she want...
When you, David, has been requested by the baron of Baleshire Castle to aid him with your expertise in psychology, you don't hesitate to travel there. Your wife, Anna, and six years old daughter, Lucy, is allowed to come with you and stay in the castle, and at first everyone's enjoying their stay. But when you begin to realize what the baron is experiencing and Anna suddenly disappears with Lucy, you fear that this was something far greater than you had expected. The game begins in your search for your family - when you suddenly hear a woman's voice in your head.
Darkness to come, and children to hide.
If you hold your soul dear, don't look into the black.
It's subtle at first, but she's looking back.
What does she want...
When you, David, has been requested by the baron of Baleshire Castle to aid him with your expertise in psychology, you don't hesitate to travel there. Your wife, Anna, and six years old daughter, Lucy, is allowed to come with you and stay in the castle, and at first everyone's enjoying their stay. But when you begin to realize what the baron is experiencing and Anna suddenly disappears with Lucy, you fear that this was something far greater than you had expected. The game begins in your search for your family - when you suddenly hear a woman's voice in your head.
Vastaukset 3
Vanhimmat
You have
six year old
wife and daughter are
muuta lause 'game begins in... kokonaan
tarkastele aikamuotoja, ne ei pysy ruodussa
Onnea matkaan!
Sorry jai tuosta viela pois että lauserakenteita kannattais katsoa, ja miettia etta onko jarkevaa kirjoitta YOU moudossa. Esim eka lause vois toimia paremmin When the baron of... requests David, an expert in psychology, to help him, David does not hesitate. En jattais sita noinkaan, mutta ymmarrat varmaan tasta mita tarkoitan. Kannattaa miettia milta se kuulostaisi suomeksi jos englanti ei ole aidinkieli. Haet ilmeisesti tuolla you muodolla sellaista aavemaisempaa tunnelmaa, mutta tallaisenaan se viela ontuu kieliopillisesti ja nyt lukijan huomio kiinnittyy ainoastaan siihen. Saanko kysya miksi kirjoitat englanniksi?
Runo on kivan aavemainen.
Vastaukset löytyvät täältä:
http://www.moddb.com/mods/in-lucys-eyes
t. kopoija