Kirjoitin tämmöisen yöllä neljän aikoihin puoliunessa ja haluaisin kritiikkiä ja kommentteja, joten antakaa palaa...
Moonlight
In the dead of night, I'm lying in my bed
Can't get sleep 'cause there's someone in my head
That someone is holding my mind on her
But couldn't remember who it was, though I tried so hard
I went for a walk to clear my mind
Wandered to the ocean, only to find,
That I wasn't alone, there was someone else
I wished it was you, but it was a reflection.
Reflection of the Moon
Gazed at the Moon oh so bright
Felt the Darkness dissolve in me
That was the power of Light
It hurt my eyes and ached my heart
It burned my head and ripped me apart.
But it felt good, 'Pain can't kill me'
I thought when Light began to fill me.
It gave me hope and took my despair
I was free from sorrows, first time in my life
I felt joy, like never before.
But the Light was cold, I longed for warmth
Then I remembered that someone, I had forgot
That someone was You, I once loved
But there was one thing what drew us apart
It was my fear of not knowing who I am.
I'm not afraid anymore, I found my courage
That courage was with me all this time
I just failed to notice, it was in my heart
It was my love for you, the fact that you'd be mine.
Moonlight
In the dead of night, I'm lying in my bed
Can't get sleep 'cause there's someone in my head
That someone is holding my mind on her
But couldn't remember who it was, though I tried so hard
I went for a walk to clear my mind
Wandered to the ocean, only to find,
That I wasn't alone, there was someone else
I wished it was you, but it was a reflection.
Reflection of the Moon
Gazed at the Moon oh so bright
Felt the Darkness dissolve in me
That was the power of Light
It hurt my eyes and ached my heart
It burned my head and ripped me apart.
But it felt good, 'Pain can't kill me'
I thought when Light began to fill me.
It gave me hope and took my despair
I was free from sorrows, first time in my life
I felt joy, like never before.
But the Light was cold, I longed for warmth
Then I remembered that someone, I had forgot
That someone was You, I once loved
But there was one thing what drew us apart
It was my fear of not knowing who I am.
I'm not afraid anymore, I found my courage
That courage was with me all this time
I just failed to notice, it was in my heart
It was my love for you, the fact that you'd be mine.
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Vanhimmat
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