Again I wake up in a cold cold sweat,
my mind in a haze, and out of breath,
sharp panic climbing up my spine,
eyes blinded by the sights of blood,
blood just like red wine.
It's in my hands, it's in my mouth,
My head aching from the screams, no way out,
I feel it here and it's oh so real,
so real you won't believe,
all the horrors I have seen.
He's the cruelest and most vicious, in love with pain
He wants me to have my innocence, redeem me,
free me under his blade.
I dare not to move, I can not cry,
too scared to make a smallest sigh,
my heart beating like thunder, in my head
as I want to disappear to my bed,
crawl under the blanket and hide.
The shadows they darken as my eyes scan the walls,
and I can not see if he is there at all,
my ears fixed to hear every single smallest sound,
under the bed, curtains waving around,
Are you there or am I insane?
I checked the windows, there's nobody out there,
nothing is moving but I still feel him in the air
I sneak around silent, see the kids are alright,
even the sound of them breathing don't vanish the frights,
too scared to put out the lights.
There's something in the night,
coming for me,
He wants to set me free, from my misery,
From my misery.
Why won't these nightmares leave me, be gone,
I'm tired and sleepless and feel so alone,
I just want to sleep alright,
dreamless through the night,
I want everything to be alright.
Everything to be alright.
my mind in a haze, and out of breath,
sharp panic climbing up my spine,
eyes blinded by the sights of blood,
blood just like red wine.
It's in my hands, it's in my mouth,
My head aching from the screams, no way out,
I feel it here and it's oh so real,
so real you won't believe,
all the horrors I have seen.
He's the cruelest and most vicious, in love with pain
He wants me to have my innocence, redeem me,
free me under his blade.
I dare not to move, I can not cry,
too scared to make a smallest sigh,
my heart beating like thunder, in my head
as I want to disappear to my bed,
crawl under the blanket and hide.
The shadows they darken as my eyes scan the walls,
and I can not see if he is there at all,
my ears fixed to hear every single smallest sound,
under the bed, curtains waving around,
Are you there or am I insane?
I checked the windows, there's nobody out there,
nothing is moving but I still feel him in the air
I sneak around silent, see the kids are alright,
even the sound of them breathing don't vanish the frights,
too scared to put out the lights.
There's something in the night,
coming for me,
He wants to set me free, from my misery,
From my misery.
Why won't these nightmares leave me, be gone,
I'm tired and sleepless and feel so alone,
I just want to sleep alright,
dreamless through the night,
I want everything to be alright.
Everything to be alright.
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Vanhimmat
...indeed very entertaining. ^^
piti vaan purkaa paha uni pois, että sai uudestaan unen päästä kiinni. kiva jos kelpasi.
Luin uudelleen ja uudelleen, kuiskasin sen, sanoin sen, huusin sen. Se on niin kaunis, etten pysty muuta kuin ihailemaan tuota sanojen täyteyttä, ja sen kertomaa tarinaa.
Painajaiset, joista tässä runossa puhutaan, pystyy todella näkemään ja tuntemaan, ja tarinaa voi kuvitella, vaikka tämä onkin vain pieni otos sen kokonaisesta sisällöstä.
Hieno ja riimit sopivat täydellisesti lähes joka kohdassa.
Ainoa sana, joka ärsyttää minua on "alright". Se ei jotenkin sovi runon muuhun luonteeseen ja aiheuttaa ristiriidan.
että se on merkitykseltään positiivinen sana, ja niitä ei paljon tästä runosta löydy.
loppu on heikko, tiedän, mutta en pysähtynyt miettimään mitä kirjoitin. tai ehkä kirjoitin sen juuri siksi, että pääsisin irti siitä unesta. kuka tahtoisi pahaa sisällään pitää, tai siinä velloa?
onneksi pahat unet ovat vain unta.