at fall's dawn I met you,
as you opened the door
a stranger, I thought
how little I knew
next night,
I dreamed about you,
the one, I already knew
I, like some newborn clairvoyante
down the long stairs,
our hands around
we knew each other,
as we'd always known
before the time
it felt so good, so warm inside
you came to save me,
to set me free
from all empty days and stagnant nights,
of my former life
you, like early summer’s night,
I, in colors of autumn leaves
and we both knew,
indeed,
it wasn't meant to be
our feather soft touches,
embraces so tempting,
so cruel, so sweet
we both impatiently curious,
no second thoughts, no return
your hands were trembling,
my heart throbbing so wild
we challenged fate, with passionate eyes,
she turned her sight,
closed her merciful eyes
for a moment of a nightingale's cry,
endless long seconds, to the lovers so rare
moments so precious,
moments so few
all too soon, you had to go
I sat down and wept,
I hardly could breathe
my silenced tears, secretly fell
there was no one to tell
I still remember you,
from time to time,
after all those years
my hiding place,
your tender, consoling hugh,
if life gets tough
you
my distant fading memory
as you opened the door
a stranger, I thought
how little I knew
next night,
I dreamed about you,
the one, I already knew
I, like some newborn clairvoyante
down the long stairs,
our hands around
we knew each other,
as we'd always known
before the time
it felt so good, so warm inside
you came to save me,
to set me free
from all empty days and stagnant nights,
of my former life
you, like early summer’s night,
I, in colors of autumn leaves
and we both knew,
indeed,
it wasn't meant to be
our feather soft touches,
embraces so tempting,
so cruel, so sweet
we both impatiently curious,
no second thoughts, no return
your hands were trembling,
my heart throbbing so wild
we challenged fate, with passionate eyes,
she turned her sight,
closed her merciful eyes
for a moment of a nightingale's cry,
endless long seconds, to the lovers so rare
moments so precious,
moments so few
all too soon, you had to go
I sat down and wept,
I hardly could breathe
my silenced tears, secretly fell
there was no one to tell
I still remember you,
from time to time,
after all those years
my hiding place,
your tender, consoling hugh,
if life gets tough
you
my distant fading memory
Vastaukset 6
Vanhimmat
.. runosi joutaisi tuonne lemmenrunojen puolelle mielestäni. Vaikka on muistelu, kyllä on tunnelmaa rakkauden jaettavaksi asti. Oikein hehkuu, etten sanoisi ja sanonkin. :)
sitä itsekin, runoni sinkaistiin ulos rakkausrunoista heti kun sen sinne laitoin, syytä en ymmärrä edelleenkään. Runo on nimenomaan rakkausruno perhana soikoon >:# .
Mutta kiitos kun ehdit taas lukemaan hehkutelmani :-).
You're just a mile away
One thousand five tiny steps from here
But if I brought you near
Would you believe when I say
It seems like yesterday
That I could reach out and touch your face
But as I fall from grace
Into whose arms can I lay
It's always much too late
We get the signs
We can't communicate
Or turn back time
So what will be now
Do you feel somehow
Not so together and not quite as strong
Now I believe
Alone doesn't have to mean lonely
After you've gone
I need a healing wind
To cool the flame burning in my sight
It must accelerate
For two wrongs they don't make a right
But I like your sensitive touch ;)
Dear Ilolias,
I thank Thee for your kind words,
your poem.
Since then,
I haven't been lonely,
though he went away
even though
he was my
first soulmate
I thank my fate,
who gave me that,
rare gift of life
the wind of time
has healed me well
what's right,
what's wrong,
who that can tell
Love,
Bel
To say something right
of the poem so hot and bright,
it is like the moon at night.
I thank you for your nice and bright little poem.
You made my day,
you made me smile.