Kirjoitin kerran lyhyen lapsille tarkoitetun sadun koulutyötä varten, jossa 20 tiettyä sanaa käyttäen piti vääntää itse keksitty satu.
Joten, mitäs mieltä olette? :D (huom. kieli ei ole välttämättä ihan oikein (ehkä...), joten toivottavasti se ei haittaa...)
(se on englanniksi, koska se oli englannin tunnille tehty...)
Without colours
Once upon a time there was a little butterfly with gigantic wings. A little butterfly was named Fly and she had just turned from caterpillar to butterfly. But Fly noticed that something was wrong – she didn´t have colours in her wings. Fly thought that she had lost them and she went look around if she could find her colours.
Fly flew around for a while until she saw a solemn and a little thickish owl. ”Excuse me, but have you seen my colours?”, she asked, but the owl answered with a coarse voice: ”Go away, I try to sleep!”. A dismal butterfly continued her way, but a persistent Fly knew that she couldn´t give up.
She kept going on and met a scrawny greater titmouse with a shrill voice, whose eye was blind. ”Excuse me, but have you seen my colours”, she asked again, and a greater titmouse answered: ”Oh no, my dear, I haven´t seen your colours, but I know an amazing waterfall, which can give colours to you.”. The greater titmouse explained, where the amazing waterfall was, and Fly continued her way. Fly was so glad that somebody helped her.
Soon a crow flew to Fly. ”Hey, where are you going?”, the crow asked. ”I´m going to the amazing waterfall.”, she answered. ”I know a shortcut to there. Follow me!”. Fly was a little incredulous about that, but she felt herself so bare without colours so she followed the crow. ”Are you sure this is the shortcut?”, Fly asked. ”Yes yes, just follow me.”, the crow answered. They flew into the dim and bleak part of the forest, which was completely indeterminate to Fly. But suddenly the deft crow turned and tried to eat Fly. Fly started to fly as fast as she could. She picked way between the trees and finally she lost the crow. She was so tired that she was going to rest a while, but then she saw a wonderful and sumptuous shimmer between the trees. Fly flew closer to the shimmer and then she saw it – the amazing waterfall, which was like a beautiful rainbow. She started to drink a water of the waterfall and she noticed that she started to get colour to her wings. She was so cheerful and happy, that she could almost cry. At the first time, Fly felt herself like a real beauty.
The End
Joten, mitäs mieltä olette? :D (huom. kieli ei ole välttämättä ihan oikein (ehkä...), joten toivottavasti se ei haittaa...)
(se on englanniksi, koska se oli englannin tunnille tehty...)
Without colours
Once upon a time there was a little butterfly with gigantic wings. A little butterfly was named Fly and she had just turned from caterpillar to butterfly. But Fly noticed that something was wrong – she didn´t have colours in her wings. Fly thought that she had lost them and she went look around if she could find her colours.
Fly flew around for a while until she saw a solemn and a little thickish owl. ”Excuse me, but have you seen my colours?”, she asked, but the owl answered with a coarse voice: ”Go away, I try to sleep!”. A dismal butterfly continued her way, but a persistent Fly knew that she couldn´t give up.
She kept going on and met a scrawny greater titmouse with a shrill voice, whose eye was blind. ”Excuse me, but have you seen my colours”, she asked again, and a greater titmouse answered: ”Oh no, my dear, I haven´t seen your colours, but I know an amazing waterfall, which can give colours to you.”. The greater titmouse explained, where the amazing waterfall was, and Fly continued her way. Fly was so glad that somebody helped her.
Soon a crow flew to Fly. ”Hey, where are you going?”, the crow asked. ”I´m going to the amazing waterfall.”, she answered. ”I know a shortcut to there. Follow me!”. Fly was a little incredulous about that, but she felt herself so bare without colours so she followed the crow. ”Are you sure this is the shortcut?”, Fly asked. ”Yes yes, just follow me.”, the crow answered. They flew into the dim and bleak part of the forest, which was completely indeterminate to Fly. But suddenly the deft crow turned and tried to eat Fly. Fly started to fly as fast as she could. She picked way between the trees and finally she lost the crow. She was so tired that she was going to rest a while, but then she saw a wonderful and sumptuous shimmer between the trees. Fly flew closer to the shimmer and then she saw it – the amazing waterfall, which was like a beautiful rainbow. She started to drink a water of the waterfall and she noticed that she started to get colour to her wings. She was so cheerful and happy, that she could almost cry. At the first time, Fly felt herself like a real beauty.
The End
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