Whose gift this is you cannot know.
My heart is in your keeping though.
You will not mind my writing here
To tell you that I love you so.
I know that you must think it queer
For me to love and not come near
But linger by some frozen lake
This most romantic time of year.
I sometimes give my head a shake
And ask if there is some mistake.
It's lonely out here 'mid the sweep
Of bitter wind and icy flake.
My love for you is dark and deep,
But it's a promise I will keep
As from afar I watch and weep,
As from afar I watch and weep.
-Robert Frost-
http://i1128.photobucket.com/albums/m489/Mckenzie_Croft/Hearts/my_frozen_heart.jpg
Sinulle, Mies.
My heart is in your keeping though.
You will not mind my writing here
To tell you that I love you so.
I know that you must think it queer
For me to love and not come near
But linger by some frozen lake
This most romantic time of year.
I sometimes give my head a shake
And ask if there is some mistake.
It's lonely out here 'mid the sweep
Of bitter wind and icy flake.
My love for you is dark and deep,
But it's a promise I will keep
As from afar I watch and weep,
As from afar I watch and weep.
-Robert Frost-
http://i1128.photobucket.com/albums/m489/Mckenzie_Croft/Hearts/my_frozen_heart.jpg
Sinulle, Mies.
Vastaukset 6
Vanhimmat
My love for you lies deep within,
Beyond moors, below crags, through forests deep in,
It is the hidden world deep in me,
Where love, hidden in secret it be.
But sometimes, when situations arise,
This secret, it loses its disquise.
Becomes open more, visible at best.
How could one such a burning fire,
put into rest?
But do I even - do I really want?
No, this love desert I can't.
For this feeling is such a bliss,
this love surely can't be amiss.
- Toiset lainaa toisilta, toiset kirjoittaa itse runonsa -
Sinulle, Nainen
that this would be him writing poems on us.
But kielipoliisi in me found an error. There's one verb, "be", missing. So it's a 10-.
Minä en osaa kirjoittaa runoja, mutta nautin niiden lukemisesta. Olen pahoillani jos et pitänyt toivotuksestani. Sinulla on kirjoittamisen lahja, ole siitä onnellinen.
Missään nimessä en pahastunut, päinvastoin :)
Kiitoksia. Suvussani on runoilijoita, ei mennyt kauhean kauan aikaa tuon kirjoittamisessa. Ehkä olen perinyt hitusen taitoja heiltä.
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Ja nimimerkille "how I wish", myönnän että menin tuossa matalan aidan kautta. En keksinyt siihen parempaa joten päätin vain laittaa tuon. Mutta et kuitenkaan huomannut että ensimmäisen säkeen toisen rivin lopussa pilkun tilalla olisi pitänyt olla piste ;)
Olen iloinen huomatessa että runoni herätti näin äkkiä vastakaikua. Kunpa samanlainen vastakaiku heräisi oikeassakin kaipuun kohteessani..
Sinulla on tuhannen taalan paikka vihjaista kuka kiinnostuksesi kohde on, eikö?
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