jos jollakin löytyy aikaa ja kärsivällisyyttä, vois tämän kielioppi/lause virheet tarkistaa hyvää hyvyyttään. :)
kiitos paljon niille jotka jaksavat tämän katsoa läpi!
"I think that I succeeded very well! First I have some problems choose my topic. But I’m fairly satisfied my selection. I believe, that best thing on this work is those pictures and the clear text.
I have problems especially whit the grammar, there might be some bad grammar, but I tried to do my best.
I think that I could search information more better. But it was very difficult found something truthfulness facts on this person, because most of pages was fan pages.
This kind of work is an educational experience and very good/important way to learn English language. Work experience was nice and challenging."
tarvisin apua myös seuraavassa lauseessa.. :) eli miten kirjoitan tämän:
toivon että lukukokemuksenne oli miellyttävä sekä mielenkiintoinen! Ja toivottavasti teille nyt selvisi myös kuka OB on.. :)
minulta loppui taito kesken, olisi hienoa jos joku auttaisi minua tässä asiassa..!
-kiitos
kiitos paljon niille jotka jaksavat tämän katsoa läpi!
"I think that I succeeded very well! First I have some problems choose my topic. But I’m fairly satisfied my selection. I believe, that best thing on this work is those pictures and the clear text.
I have problems especially whit the grammar, there might be some bad grammar, but I tried to do my best.
I think that I could search information more better. But it was very difficult found something truthfulness facts on this person, because most of pages was fan pages.
This kind of work is an educational experience and very good/important way to learn English language. Work experience was nice and challenging."
tarvisin apua myös seuraavassa lauseessa.. :) eli miten kirjoitan tämän:
toivon että lukukokemuksenne oli miellyttävä sekä mielenkiintoinen! Ja toivottavasti teille nyt selvisi myös kuka OB on.. :)
minulta loppui taito kesken, olisi hienoa jos joku auttaisi minua tässä asiassa..!
-kiitos
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Vanhimmat
En takaa et mun korjaukset on sit ihan 100 % oikein mut yritän...
"I think that I succeeded very well! First I HAD some problems chooseN my topic. But I’m fairly satisfied WITH my selection. I believe, that THE best thing on this work is TO thoOse pictures and the clear text.
I have problems especially WITH the grammar, there might be some bad grammar(bad grammar...tosta en oo ihan varma...), but I tried to do my best.
I think that I could HAVE searchED information better. But it was very difficult TO found something TRUTHFUL facts ABOUT this person, because most of THE pages WERE fan pages.
This kind of work is an educational experience and very good/important way to learn English. (ei language perään). Work experience was nice and challenging."
Toivottavasti noista jotain apua oli, jos joku tietää paremmin niin voi sitten lisätä/korjata.
toivon että lukukokemuksenne oli miellyttävä sekä mielenkiintoinen! Ja toivottavasti teille nyt selvisi myös kuka OB on.. :)
I hope that your reading experience was pleasant and interesting! And hopefully you also found out who O.B. is.
kiitos todella paljon!! *rutistus*
ihanaa että on vielä olemassa noin avuliaita ihmisiä.. =)
tästä oli todella paljon apua kiitokset sinulle
Mun ehdotus:
I think that I succeeded very well! First I had some problems choosing my topic. But I’m fairly satisfied with my selection. I believe, that the best thing in this work is those pictures and the clear text.
I had some problems especially with the grammar, there might be some mistakes, but I tried to do my best.
I think that I could have searched some more information. But it was very difficult to find real facts about this person, because most of the pages was made by his fans.
This kind of work is an educational experience and very good/important way to learn English. The experience was nice and challenging.
I hope your reading experience was pleasant and interesting. And I also hope you found out who O.B. is..
Tähän mennessä tekstin korjaajilla on ensimmäinen kappale retuperällä ihan täysin joten korjaa itse se. Lisäksi myöhemmin esiintyy liikaa toistoa paikoitellen. Itse en jaksa korjata ks. virheitä.