Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix
Chapter One – Whispers in the Darkness
Most boys looked forward to their birthdays and dread returning to school; Harry Potter is not most boys. This is because Harry Potter is no normal boy either. Fourteen years ago an evil person by the name of Lord Voldemort came to the place Harry and his parents lived and killed Lily and James Potter but when he came to Harry his curse seemed to rebound and destroy himself. This was when a man named Rubeus Hagrid was ordered to retrieve Harry from the rubble of his family’s home and take him to the Dursley’s who were his only living relatives and had no magical blood in them at all. You see, Harry Potter is a wizard. And ever since that fateful night Halloween, fourteen years ago, Harry has been stuck with an aunt and uncle who detest him and a cousin who bullies him… but at least now, unlike the first nine years of his life, he could bear with his retched family because he only had to spend two months of the year with them.
The rest of the year he spent at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry with his two best friends Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. With his Gryffindor Friends, Quidditch, Feasts, Balls and Lessons. This was the reason he was sat at his desk in the smallest room in number four, Privet Drive doing his homework from his Transfiguration teacher Professor McGonagall.
The sun shone onto his parchment as he thought about ‘Various Animagi of this century, their chosen form, markings and history’, Professor McGonagall had said that a big portion of fifth year would be taken up on the study of Animagi. After sucking his quill for a minute he continued to write –
Lorelei Papillon was born in 1964 in Prague to a Muggle woman and her Wizard husband. A shy yet beautiful girl she was considered to be the most desired of her nine sisters. She was also well known in Prague for being highly intelligent. After studying at The Beauxbatons Academy Ms. Papillon took up the job as Transfiguration teacher, a post previously held by Madame Olympe Maxime who then became headmistress. This was when Ms. Papillon looked into becoming an Animagus. She…
But Harry’s thought train was cut short by a booming voice that rattled the very floorboards he stood on, including the loose one under his bed in which he kept many of his wizarding items.
“BOY! BOY GET DOWN HERE NOW!” roared the unmistakeable voice of his Uncle Vernon. Harry scuttled down the stairs and realised what Uncle Vernon was so furious about.
He was stood, his face turning so purple it looked like a huge bruise, as he pointed to what looked like a battered old grey feather duster and a flying tennis ball both of which where lying limply in Uncle Vernon’s salad (Everyone was still on Dudley’s diet).
Recognising the duster as Errol and the tennis ball as Pigwidgeon, both of whom were owls belonging to the Weasley family, he quickly scooped them both up and scooted back up to his room.
He first untied the package Pigwidgeon had been carrying from round the little owl’s legs and perched him in Hedwig’s empty cage, as she had recently been sent with a letter to Hermione. Opening the package he broke into a smile. It contained a stack of comic books entitled ‘The Adventures of Martin Miggs: The Mad Muggle” as well as a letter from Ron.
Dear Harry,
How are you? I’m doing fine. I thought that you might be bored at home all summer with only those Muggles for company so I have sent you some issues of my favourite comic I didn’t know if you already had any so I’ve sent you some of the funniest ones just in case (I hope you get them, I don’t know whether Pig will make it all the way to your house with the weight of them).
The main news is… I’ve been made a prefect!!!! Me! Mum was dead chuffed because she thinks there’s going to be another Head Boy in the family but I doubt that, I didn’t even want to be a prefect.
Harry knew that this was a lie and that all Ron wanted to do was to follow in the footsteps of his brothers, but he also knew that Ron would never admit this.
So if you’re made a prefect too then we might be able to get back at Malfoy and the Slytherins. I’m sure you will all the teachers love you, well except Snape but he doesn’t like anyone does he? Percy says that each year four prefects are chosen for each house for the new fifth years and that they are chosen by the heads of the other three houses and the fourth one by Dumbledore. Dumbledore’s bound to choose you Harry, I’m sure of it.
Anyway enjoy the comics; I’ll have to send you your birthday present soon (Mum wouldn’t let me yet).
Ron.
Harry smiled at the thought of it. He, Harry Potter, a prefect, he liked the idea of being able to put Malfoy in his place. He sat on his bed imagining the look on Malfoy’s face as he took fifty points from Slytherin.
He began to open his next letter expecting to find that Ron had forgotten to put something in his first letter but to his surprise he found it was not from Ron at all.
Dear Harry,
First of all we have to say thanks for the money you gave us last year, we still can’t get over it. But we have put it to good use, haven’t we George? Yes Fred. We have already put down the money for a joke shop in Hogsmeade for next year. And bought Ron new dress robes. As well as a few other things that we wont tell you about yet.
Dad says he’s glad we’re not going into The Ministry now because of all the fuss Cornelius Fudge is causing. He seems to want to ignore the fact that you-know-who is back. But you said it scared you too the other night George. Shut up Fred! Anyway Dad and Percy keep on having big arguments over the state of The Ministry and Dad nearly quit last week! But he didn’t.
We have some money left over so we used some of it to buy you this as a ‘Thank You’. It’s called a ‘Poppins Box’ and you can fit as much as you want into it and it wont become full. The item can’t weigh more than the person using the box though, so no elephants because it won’t work (we’ve tried).
Your fellow Quidditch team members and friends
Gred and Feorge
P.S. Katie got Head Girl, she told George last week.
He looked at the little box that looked to be around twenty centimetres by ten centimetres and only around five centimetres thick. He wondered whether Fred and George were plating another joke on him.
He took the entire stack on Martin Miggs comics (all of which were bigger than the box in surface area) and tried to put them into the box. When his hand approached the box it’s lid opened and it widened snatching the comic books from Harry’s hand like a hungry animal. Harry then reached inside and felt nothing, had he just lost all of Ron’s comic books? What would Ron say?! He tried again but this time concentrating on the thing he wanted to pull out and he could instantly feel them.
Harry was feeling a bit tired by now and, even though it was only dusk, Harry climbed into bed. Not forgetting to open his window first in case any other owls decided to stop by. Then he slowly drifted off into a deep sleep.
Luku yksi - Kuiskauksia pimeydestä
Suurin osa pojista odottaa syntymäpäiviään ja kammoaa kouluun palaamista; mutta Harry Potter ei ole kuin useimmat pojat. Harry Potter ei ole normaali muutenkaan. Neljätoista vuotta sitten eräs paha ihminen nimeltään Lordi Voldemort tuli paikkaan jossa hän asui vanhempiensa Lily ja James Potterin kanssa. Hän tappoi heidät; mutta kun hän lähestyi Harrya hänen oma kirouksensa tuhosi hänet itsensä. Tällöin mies nimeltä Rubeus Hagrid käskettiin ottamaan Harry kotoaan ja viemään hänet Dursleyden luo, jotka olivat Harryn ainoat elossa olevat sukulaiset, eikä heissä virrannut taikaverta ollenkaan. Katsos, Harry Potter on velho. Ja siitä kamalasta Halloween yöstä asti, neljätoista vuotta sitten, Harry oli ollut jumissa tädin ja sedän kanssa jotka halveksivat häntä ja serkun joka kiusasi häntä... mutta viimeinkin, sen ensimmäisen yhdeksän vuoden jälkeen, hänen tarvitsi kestää sitä perhettä vain kaksi kuukautta vuodessa.
Lopun vuotta hän viettää Tylypahkan noitien ja velhojen koulussa kahden parhaan ystävänsä Ron Weasleyn ja Hermione Grangerin kanssa. Rohkelikko toveriensa kanssa tunneilla ja muualla. Tämä oli syy minkä takia hän istui pienen pöytänsä ääressä Likusteritie neljässä tekemässä muodonmuutoksen läksyjä Professori McGarmivalle....
......jatkakaa suomentamista. Mä en jaksa, enkä ymmärrä enempää....
Chapter One – Whispers in the Darkness
Most boys looked forward to their birthdays and dread returning to school; Harry Potter is not most boys. This is because Harry Potter is no normal boy either. Fourteen years ago an evil person by the name of Lord Voldemort came to the place Harry and his parents lived and killed Lily and James Potter but when he came to Harry his curse seemed to rebound and destroy himself. This was when a man named Rubeus Hagrid was ordered to retrieve Harry from the rubble of his family’s home and take him to the Dursley’s who were his only living relatives and had no magical blood in them at all. You see, Harry Potter is a wizard. And ever since that fateful night Halloween, fourteen years ago, Harry has been stuck with an aunt and uncle who detest him and a cousin who bullies him… but at least now, unlike the first nine years of his life, he could bear with his retched family because he only had to spend two months of the year with them.
The rest of the year he spent at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry with his two best friends Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. With his Gryffindor Friends, Quidditch, Feasts, Balls and Lessons. This was the reason he was sat at his desk in the smallest room in number four, Privet Drive doing his homework from his Transfiguration teacher Professor McGonagall.
The sun shone onto his parchment as he thought about ‘Various Animagi of this century, their chosen form, markings and history’, Professor McGonagall had said that a big portion of fifth year would be taken up on the study of Animagi. After sucking his quill for a minute he continued to write –
Lorelei Papillon was born in 1964 in Prague to a Muggle woman and her Wizard husband. A shy yet beautiful girl she was considered to be the most desired of her nine sisters. She was also well known in Prague for being highly intelligent. After studying at The Beauxbatons Academy Ms. Papillon took up the job as Transfiguration teacher, a post previously held by Madame Olympe Maxime who then became headmistress. This was when Ms. Papillon looked into becoming an Animagus. She…
But Harry’s thought train was cut short by a booming voice that rattled the very floorboards he stood on, including the loose one under his bed in which he kept many of his wizarding items.
“BOY! BOY GET DOWN HERE NOW!” roared the unmistakeable voice of his Uncle Vernon. Harry scuttled down the stairs and realised what Uncle Vernon was so furious about.
He was stood, his face turning so purple it looked like a huge bruise, as he pointed to what looked like a battered old grey feather duster and a flying tennis ball both of which where lying limply in Uncle Vernon’s salad (Everyone was still on Dudley’s diet).
Recognising the duster as Errol and the tennis ball as Pigwidgeon, both of whom were owls belonging to the Weasley family, he quickly scooped them both up and scooted back up to his room.
He first untied the package Pigwidgeon had been carrying from round the little owl’s legs and perched him in Hedwig’s empty cage, as she had recently been sent with a letter to Hermione. Opening the package he broke into a smile. It contained a stack of comic books entitled ‘The Adventures of Martin Miggs: The Mad Muggle” as well as a letter from Ron.
Dear Harry,
How are you? I’m doing fine. I thought that you might be bored at home all summer with only those Muggles for company so I have sent you some issues of my favourite comic I didn’t know if you already had any so I’ve sent you some of the funniest ones just in case (I hope you get them, I don’t know whether Pig will make it all the way to your house with the weight of them).
The main news is… I’ve been made a prefect!!!! Me! Mum was dead chuffed because she thinks there’s going to be another Head Boy in the family but I doubt that, I didn’t even want to be a prefect.
Harry knew that this was a lie and that all Ron wanted to do was to follow in the footsteps of his brothers, but he also knew that Ron would never admit this.
So if you’re made a prefect too then we might be able to get back at Malfoy and the Slytherins. I’m sure you will all the teachers love you, well except Snape but he doesn’t like anyone does he? Percy says that each year four prefects are chosen for each house for the new fifth years and that they are chosen by the heads of the other three houses and the fourth one by Dumbledore. Dumbledore’s bound to choose you Harry, I’m sure of it.
Anyway enjoy the comics; I’ll have to send you your birthday present soon (Mum wouldn’t let me yet).
Ron.
Harry smiled at the thought of it. He, Harry Potter, a prefect, he liked the idea of being able to put Malfoy in his place. He sat on his bed imagining the look on Malfoy’s face as he took fifty points from Slytherin.
He began to open his next letter expecting to find that Ron had forgotten to put something in his first letter but to his surprise he found it was not from Ron at all.
Dear Harry,
First of all we have to say thanks for the money you gave us last year, we still can’t get over it. But we have put it to good use, haven’t we George? Yes Fred. We have already put down the money for a joke shop in Hogsmeade for next year. And bought Ron new dress robes. As well as a few other things that we wont tell you about yet.
Dad says he’s glad we’re not going into The Ministry now because of all the fuss Cornelius Fudge is causing. He seems to want to ignore the fact that you-know-who is back. But you said it scared you too the other night George. Shut up Fred! Anyway Dad and Percy keep on having big arguments over the state of The Ministry and Dad nearly quit last week! But he didn’t.
We have some money left over so we used some of it to buy you this as a ‘Thank You’. It’s called a ‘Poppins Box’ and you can fit as much as you want into it and it wont become full. The item can’t weigh more than the person using the box though, so no elephants because it won’t work (we’ve tried).
Your fellow Quidditch team members and friends
Gred and Feorge
P.S. Katie got Head Girl, she told George last week.
He looked at the little box that looked to be around twenty centimetres by ten centimetres and only around five centimetres thick. He wondered whether Fred and George were plating another joke on him.
He took the entire stack on Martin Miggs comics (all of which were bigger than the box in surface area) and tried to put them into the box. When his hand approached the box it’s lid opened and it widened snatching the comic books from Harry’s hand like a hungry animal. Harry then reached inside and felt nothing, had he just lost all of Ron’s comic books? What would Ron say?! He tried again but this time concentrating on the thing he wanted to pull out and he could instantly feel them.
Harry was feeling a bit tired by now and, even though it was only dusk, Harry climbed into bed. Not forgetting to open his window first in case any other owls decided to stop by. Then he slowly drifted off into a deep sleep.
Luku yksi - Kuiskauksia pimeydestä
Suurin osa pojista odottaa syntymäpäiviään ja kammoaa kouluun palaamista; mutta Harry Potter ei ole kuin useimmat pojat. Harry Potter ei ole normaali muutenkaan. Neljätoista vuotta sitten eräs paha ihminen nimeltään Lordi Voldemort tuli paikkaan jossa hän asui vanhempiensa Lily ja James Potterin kanssa. Hän tappoi heidät; mutta kun hän lähestyi Harrya hänen oma kirouksensa tuhosi hänet itsensä. Tällöin mies nimeltä Rubeus Hagrid käskettiin ottamaan Harry kotoaan ja viemään hänet Dursleyden luo, jotka olivat Harryn ainoat elossa olevat sukulaiset, eikä heissä virrannut taikaverta ollenkaan. Katsos, Harry Potter on velho. Ja siitä kamalasta Halloween yöstä asti, neljätoista vuotta sitten, Harry oli ollut jumissa tädin ja sedän kanssa jotka halveksivat häntä ja serkun joka kiusasi häntä... mutta viimeinkin, sen ensimmäisen yhdeksän vuoden jälkeen, hänen tarvitsi kestää sitä perhettä vain kaksi kuukautta vuodessa.
Lopun vuotta hän viettää Tylypahkan noitien ja velhojen koulussa kahden parhaan ystävänsä Ron Weasleyn ja Hermione Grangerin kanssa. Rohkelikko toveriensa kanssa tunneilla ja muualla. Tämä oli syy minkä takia hän istui pienen pöytänsä ääressä Likusteritie neljässä tekemässä muodonmuutoksen läksyjä Professori McGarmivalle....
......jatkakaa suomentamista. Mä en jaksa, enkä ymmärrä enempää....
Vastaukset 8
Vanhimmat
Valitettavasti mä en haluu lukea kirjan ekaa lukua koska muuten haluaisin lukea vaan lisää ja lisää. En siis voi auttaa suomennuksessa.... :)
Juuh pakko oli lukee toi... Onnex ymmärsin ainaki melkein kaikki... paitsi en nyt kerkee suomentaa mut voin sit yrittää ku on aikaa..
ettei tuo voi olla aitoa tekstiä, sillä siitä olis noussu jo maailmanlaajuinen skandaali :D
Tottahan se on, että teksti ei voi olla aito, koska Rowling ei oo antanu kenenkään lukea keskeneräistä/julkaisematonta kirjaa. Ei se oo antanu ees oman tyttönsä lukea sitä, niin miten se on saatu. EI SE VOI OLLA AITOA TEKSTIÄ!
Niin, kohuhan siitä nousisi. Mitähän Rowling sanoisi - jos tietäisi.
Niin, tänäänhän oli se uutinen, että Rowling oli lukenut 4. kirjaa syöpää sairastavalle tytölle puhelimessa ennen kirjan julkaisemista.
Ei sitä paitsi ollut oikein Rowlingin tyylin kuuloista... hän perustelee ja kiemurtelee, juoni ei noin vaan ala. Ja kirjailijathan tarkastaa tekstinsä monta kertaa ennen kuin julkaisivat (edes läheiselle ihmiselle).
toi oli tosiaanki vähän oudon kuulosta...ei vaikuttanu yhtään samanlaiselta ku muut potterit...ja rowling kertoo yleensä tarkemmin harryn aiemmasta elämästä,voldemortista ja muista!
...jos en oo aivan väärässä, niin siellä oli muutama kieliopillinen virhekin. Mutta kohtalaisen hyvin on mielestäni Rolingin tyyliä matkittu, otettu vähän jotain joka kirjan alkukappaleesta.