Your picture on the wall
Your voice inside my head
Your pretty eyes
Feeling tired?
Stay here where I can see you
Don?t lie to me
I can notice it from your eyes
Trust me I know you
Silence in your words
Message on the wall that I have missed
tells me to open my eyes and try to live with whole soul
Try forget everything I have told to you
It was all lie for self-confidence to trade myself
Windows of the Glass World of yours
have broken
There is nothing left of the Old Life
Strange feeling inside my head tells me to open the door to you
Voice inside my mind tells me to trust the instincts
Just stare the sign and image the light upon you
The sound of silence is my home and hope
Have anyone said
Your eyes are beautiful
Have anyone told
Your breath creates life
Will you make it happen or should I do something to help you
This is my only wish before I?m gone
Then it?s too late to give me love that I have wanted
Take the last breath and let it go
Just before it?s too late to give up
Have anyone said
Your smile is beautiful
Have anyone told
?Even your lies have to be true?
Look down, Look up
You see, You see me
Think clearly, Think wisely
If your eyes lie
Your ears have to be right
Don?t trust them
They will betray
All you have said is deep in my mind
I can?t forgot even I try
I know you
Better than you self do
All your memories will remain in my own world
Tommosia....
Your voice inside my head
Your pretty eyes
Feeling tired?
Stay here where I can see you
Don?t lie to me
I can notice it from your eyes
Trust me I know you
Silence in your words
Message on the wall that I have missed
tells me to open my eyes and try to live with whole soul
Try forget everything I have told to you
It was all lie for self-confidence to trade myself
Windows of the Glass World of yours
have broken
There is nothing left of the Old Life
Strange feeling inside my head tells me to open the door to you
Voice inside my mind tells me to trust the instincts
Just stare the sign and image the light upon you
The sound of silence is my home and hope
Have anyone said
Your eyes are beautiful
Have anyone told
Your breath creates life
Will you make it happen or should I do something to help you
This is my only wish before I?m gone
Then it?s too late to give me love that I have wanted
Take the last breath and let it go
Just before it?s too late to give up
Have anyone said
Your smile is beautiful
Have anyone told
?Even your lies have to be true?
Look down, Look up
You see, You see me
Think clearly, Think wisely
If your eyes lie
Your ears have to be right
Don?t trust them
They will betray
All you have said is deep in my mind
I can?t forgot even I try
I know you
Better than you self do
All your memories will remain in my own world
Tommosia....
Vastaukset 5
Vanhimmat
hienoa tekstiä oli, tuosta saisi jopa laulunkin kehiteltyä, jos säveltäjän löytäisit..
Lauluksi se enemmän olikin tarkoitettu. Joku kun saisi sävellettyä. Voisi itsekin yrittää....
Antakaa nyt vähäsen rakentavaa kritiikkiä. Tost tuli vähä pitkä mut yrittäkää lukee.
Mä voisin yrittää tuohon jotain sävellellä, jos vaan kiinnostaa.
Muutamia kappaleita oon aikasemmin kirjoittanut, mutta viimekertaisesta on vähän pitempi aika. Olinkin tässä jo etsiskelemässä jotain sanoittajaa jostain, ja nuo näyttivät ihan kiinnostavilta. Katsotaan jos siihen saisi mitään kehiteltyä.
Onko tyylillä mitään väliä? Hidasta vai nopeeta, duurissa vai mollissa...? Anna vaikka joku bändiesimerkki, niin tajuan tyylin, jota haet takaa.
Jos välttämättä haluat niin Jethro Tull tai Dream Theater, mutta varmaan bändin kanssa yritetään tuosta jotakin saada ehkä aikaan.