kokeillaanpa Let`s try this

ookkei!!! That´s the way we start to change...

Sulla ei tainnu olla yhtäkään lausetta joka olis ollu täysin oikein, ei millään pahalla. Mutta on hyvä kun kuitenkin yrität, sillä opit!

Ihan alussa sulla lukee 1 day of April. Se pitäis olla 1st day of April tai ihan 1st of April. Jos sanoo "one day of April", se tarkottaa että yhtenä huhtikuun päivänä, eli voi tarkottaa mitä tahansa päivää huhtikuussa.

Sitten sanoit tekstin alussa "has arrested young man suspected about robbing Nordea office at Espoo keskus in last week."
Tuo pitäisi olla "has arrested a young man who is a suspect of robbing a Nordea office last week in downtown Espoo (jos tässä on puhe Espoon keskustasta niin downtown tai center. En tiedä mitä sä tarkotat Espoon keskuksella). Eli mitään "in last week" ei ole, vaan se on last week.

"Suspected man has born in 1984"
-The suspect/the suspected man was born in 1984

"According to police at same time most from boofies have got back."
-according to the police, they got most of the booties back at the same time.

"The police catched man on sunday from his home, but he told about the thing until today."
-The police catched the man on sunday at his home, but told about the news today.

"They got after suspected thanks for police`s own studies."
-The police was able to track the suspect, thanks to their investigations.

"So we haven`t got enought good clue from the audience, which had could lead us after maker, defected the leader of studies crime constable Jukka Kaski from Espoo police"
-Siis tuossa puhut nyt liimasta, et johtolangasta, vaikka sana on sama. Sen kuuluisi olla jotenkin näin "We didn't get enought clues (mutta jos sä puhut yhdestä johtolangasta niin se on a clue. Liima on clue) from the audience (tai eye witnesses) that would have helped us to track the suspect, tells the crime inspector Jukka Kaski from Espoo police.

"Kaski told that the man haven`t done any opposition during the catching. According to the police from the apartment was founded the most from about value of couple euro boofies."
-Huh... Eihän tuosta jälkimmäisestä osasta käännöstä saa mitään tolkkua. Eli näin "Kaski said/told, that the man didn't resist during the arrest. According to the police, most of the booty worth a few thousand euros, was found at his apartment".

"On tuesday happened crop used hand gun is still missing. The police is suspecting that the weapon is right."
-The hand gun used in the robbery on wednesday, is still mossing. The police suspects that the gun was real.

"About the case linking details police is still silent. He didn`t speak out for example, has man worked alone or has man confessed his achievement."
-The police is still silent about the details of the investigation. They haven't had any comments on weather the man worked alone or if the man confessed.

En väitä että mun käännös on varmasti täydellinen, eli joku joka puhuu enkkua äidinkielenään voi korjailla sitten myös mun virheet.

Sorry, but the English was very poor.
Bank crop??
Boofies??
"defected the leader of studies crime" - what??
An achievement is always something positive, and a crime can never be considered an achievement, unless you are a criminal.

Invest in a good dictionary and take English lessons.

Rautalankakäännöksen mestariteos, niin hyvässä kuin pahassakin.
Oivaa ymmärrystä ja mauttomuutta sopivassa sekoituksessa.
Keep on going :)

Voisin vielä lisätä että nykyinen otsikkosi "Young man has arrested about Espoo`s bank crop" tarkoittaa että "nuori mies on pidättänyt Espoon pankkisadosta"

Jos haluat passiivilauseen, alku menisi "young man has been arrested", usein sanomalehtikielessä kuitenkin jätetään "apuverbit" pois eli ihan vaan "young man arrested..".

Sitten, crop "sato, vilja, tähkä", rob on verbi "ryöstää" -> robbery - "ryöstö"

About kuulostaa myöskin jotenkin hassulta.. Oma ehdotus olisi "Young man arrested following Espoo bank robbery"