Olen 15 vuotias tyttö, en tiennyt minne muualle pistää, mutta halusin kirjoittaa yhden kirjoittamistani lauluista tänne, kertokaa mielipiteenne...tosiaan enkuksi, anteeksi jos joitakin väärin kirjoitettu.
I've been watching you a lot
My feelings are burning and I feel so hot
If this isn't right, it's OK to be wrong
This road of love is so long...
I realized, you're my candle
My every heartbeat, you handle
I'm so confused about this all
Promise me, you don't make me fall...
And when I close my eyes
I can't lie...
And when I open my eyes
I can't lie...
I'm so lost in your eyes
I just make a smile
And be losted in you for a while
If I hear you breathing
I wanna wake up next to you in the morning
I just can't control myself
I'm so confused about this all, why I don't tell ?
I'm going crazy, what is this ?
I don't know, but I love it...
And now I know, I can't let go
I just wanna look at you, oh
I'm so confused about this all
Promise me, you don't make me fall...
And I keep watching and watching !
And I keep just falling and falling !
I'm so lost in your eyes...
And when I close my eyes
I can't lie...
And when I open my eyes
I can't lie...
I'm so lost in your eyes
I just make a smile
And be losted in you for a while
If I hear you breathing
I wanna wake up next to you in the morning...
I'm so lost in your eyes
I just make a smile
And be losted in you for a while
You're the perfect guy...
I've been watching you a lot
My feelings are burning and I feel so hot
If this isn't right, it's OK to be wrong
This road of love is so long...
I realized, you're my candle
My every heartbeat, you handle
I'm so confused about this all
Promise me, you don't make me fall...
And when I close my eyes
I can't lie...
And when I open my eyes
I can't lie...
I'm so lost in your eyes
I just make a smile
And be losted in you for a while
If I hear you breathing
I wanna wake up next to you in the morning
I just can't control myself
I'm so confused about this all, why I don't tell ?
I'm going crazy, what is this ?
I don't know, but I love it...
And now I know, I can't let go
I just wanna look at you, oh
I'm so confused about this all
Promise me, you don't make me fall...
And I keep watching and watching !
And I keep just falling and falling !
I'm so lost in your eyes...
And when I close my eyes
I can't lie...
And when I open my eyes
I can't lie...
I'm so lost in your eyes
I just make a smile
And be losted in you for a while
If I hear you breathing
I wanna wake up next to you in the morning...
I'm so lost in your eyes
I just make a smile
And be losted in you for a while
You're the perfect guy...
Vastaukset 2
Vanhimmat
Kaunista, mutta tänne palstalle ei saisi kirjoittaa kuin suomeksi tai ruotsiksi. Annan tämän nyt olla täällä, koska haluan kannustaa nuoria runoilun ja yms. vastaavan pariin. Toivottavasti saat paljon vastauksia ja kannustusta palstalaisilta..Muistathan jatkossa kirjoittaa suomeksi :)
Mukavaa talvea sinulle.
Opladii
Todella kaunista.
Onko tälle lyriikalle melodiakin?
Minä ainakin pidin kovasti, jatka samaa rataa:)
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