Eli, olen kääntänyt osan Harry Potter ja Aurinkoriipus jatkiksesta(http://keskustelu.suomi24.fi/show.cgi?category=113&conference=678&posting=22000000000366965)englanniksi ja nyt alan julkaista osia siitä. Toivottavasti ei ole paljon kirjoitusvirheitä! mutta jos löytyy, ilmoittakaa (en ole yhtään hyvä englannissa)!
Harry Potter and the pendant of the sun
The firebird
It was very ordinary sunny day at number four Privet Drive. So ordinary, that none one ever believe that on those ladders came the world’s almost greatest wizard winner fifteen years ago.
Harry Potter looked like, from the outside, very usual boy (although very lean and weed) but he wasn’t. He was namely a wizard. Both he wasn’t usual at the world of the Witchcraft and Wizardry too because he had the scar on his front-head which he got from Lord Voldemort the strongest Dark wizard trough the ages.
He had murdered Harry’s parents but he can’t to kill little Harry and he had to escape to Albania half-dead. But now Voldemort was stronger than ever and Harry thought what he had to do if Voldemort appears to Privet Drive. Although Harry hated Durleys he can’t to wish to them a destiny on Voldemorts hands.
Harry’s thoughts interrupted when he heard Uncle Vernon’s shout: “Boy get down, now!” Harry went downstairs. “Boy, can you explain this?” Uncle Vernon shouted (he looked like a beetroot). Harry looked at the corner of the room and he saw a rubber haddock, which he thought came from Fred and George Weasly. Harry thought that twins had sent it and Uncle Vernon take for it Harry’s wand, raise it from the floor and the pseudo-wand was squeakily explode to rubber haddock. “Of course I can explain it. You’ll surprised from my detective skills”, Harry said his voice shaking by laugh, “But I’m not sure that you want to hear it. Let say that it was very great joke from my familiar friends.”
Uncle Vernon looked like that he was going to bloat and he shouted to Harry: ” We don’t need any jokes from freaks in this house!” Harry watched his uncle’s blue-red face very amused and answered: “Of course. I’ve bad feeling that if I tell them that they’ll send us a toilet-seat.” Uncle Vernon remained to unfolding his mouth when Harry went upstairs.
Lisää osia tulee jos tästä pidetään.
Harry Potter and the pendant of the sun
The firebird
It was very ordinary sunny day at number four Privet Drive. So ordinary, that none one ever believe that on those ladders came the world’s almost greatest wizard winner fifteen years ago.
Harry Potter looked like, from the outside, very usual boy (although very lean and weed) but he wasn’t. He was namely a wizard. Both he wasn’t usual at the world of the Witchcraft and Wizardry too because he had the scar on his front-head which he got from Lord Voldemort the strongest Dark wizard trough the ages.
He had murdered Harry’s parents but he can’t to kill little Harry and he had to escape to Albania half-dead. But now Voldemort was stronger than ever and Harry thought what he had to do if Voldemort appears to Privet Drive. Although Harry hated Durleys he can’t to wish to them a destiny on Voldemorts hands.
Harry’s thoughts interrupted when he heard Uncle Vernon’s shout: “Boy get down, now!” Harry went downstairs. “Boy, can you explain this?” Uncle Vernon shouted (he looked like a beetroot). Harry looked at the corner of the room and he saw a rubber haddock, which he thought came from Fred and George Weasly. Harry thought that twins had sent it and Uncle Vernon take for it Harry’s wand, raise it from the floor and the pseudo-wand was squeakily explode to rubber haddock. “Of course I can explain it. You’ll surprised from my detective skills”, Harry said his voice shaking by laugh, “But I’m not sure that you want to hear it. Let say that it was very great joke from my familiar friends.”
Uncle Vernon looked like that he was going to bloat and he shouted to Harry: ” We don’t need any jokes from freaks in this house!” Harry watched his uncle’s blue-red face very amused and answered: “Of course. I’ve bad feeling that if I tell them that they’ll send us a toilet-seat.” Uncle Vernon remained to unfolding his mouth when Harry went upstairs.
Lisää osia tulee jos tästä pidetään.
Vastaukset 8
Vanhimmat
Oh... Periaate on hyvä, tai siis sulla on ihan hyvä tapa kääntää, ehkä vähän kirjaimellinen. Mut kieliopissa on suunnattomasti parannettavaa... Kannattais hankkia beta-lukija. Koska sulla on siis noita artikkelivirheitä ja muita... Ack... Melkeen kaikki 'a' ja 'an'it puuttuu...
laita vaan lisää...toi oli ihan hyvä..:D
Jatkan lauantaina, kun silloin pääsen pitemmäksi ajaksi nettiin...
kiitän jo etukäteen...:)
...lisää vaan!mä ainakin tykkään...:)ja haluan lukee lisää.sä kirjotat ihan hyvin.ainakin mä ymmärrän(ainakin luulen ymmärtäväni)suurimman osan...eli jatka vaan:)
Jatkuu...
When he entered to the room he saw Pig flying happily round the room. When he snatched a letter from Pigs foot Harry noticed that letter was from Hermione and Ron.
Hello Harry
Can you come to Diagon Alley next Wednesday if it’s possible? We have to talk, there is something upsetting happened, Dad has been fired from his job. Dad doesn’t want to explain why. But I think that Lucius Malfoy is behind this. He has always hated my dad and his muggle protection laws and now he has somehow got over speak the Ministry and fired dad. So if it’s possible can you come to Diagon Ally next Wednesday? And can you write to Sirius, I’m sure he wants to hear about this.
I have to ask apology instead Fred and George. They think that it was very funny to send you that rubber haddock. I hope you didn’t get trouble from it. I hope we’ll see on Diagon Alley next Wednesday, send the answer as soon as possible!
Sincerely Ron and Hermione
Harry folded the letter to the desk and thought that now he couldn’t ask Uncle Vernon to take him to London, when he was already angry because of rudder haddock. But Harry decided to try yet and he went downstairs to the lounge.
Uncle Vernon was further entirely red. He didn’t see (or wanted to see) Harry, who entered to room hesitatingly. “Errh… Uncle Vernon, can you take me to Diag…. I mean to London if it is possible?” Harry intended to say Diagon Alley and Uncle Vernon would get angry more. “And what for?” Uncle Vernon snorted.
“Well… I… look, I have to meet my friends there”, Harry answered little hope in his voice. “And you think that I have time to take you round the world that you can meet your freak- friends? No no no it isn’t possible”, Uncle Vernon said.
“ Well it doesn’t matter. I go now to write to Ron and oh.. I have to write to Sirius too, I haven’t to write him for month”, Harry said and waited what Uncle Vernon would answer. His face turned pale: “Well, in fact I have some works to do in London, so... yes you can come with me to London”, Uncle Vernon looked like that he was in trouble when he said that. “Thank you!” Harry shouted and ran to his room. He started to write to Ron, that he’d get on Wednesday to Diagon Alley. Harry took a peace of parchment and a quill.
Hello Ron, Harry started.
I get concession from muggles to come to Diagon Alley.
We can buy school stuffs there too? We’ll meet then, take care.
Sincerely Harry
And then Harry saw it, towards the window flew something, which looked like a little sun. It was big, an enormous big something. Anything like Harry hadn’t seen before.
To be continue...
When Harry looked carefully screwing up one’s eyes Harry saw something hairy on its bag. It came all the time closer and stopped in front of the Harry’s window. “Hello Harry! Nice to see you!” the voice said behind the window. “Hagrid! Is that you?” Harry yelled eager. “On my own person! ” Hagrid answered. “What’s that?” Harry asked. “It’ called firebird. They’ very fine creatures, I can say. They’ very powerful and strong and they radiate so powerful sparkle that It’ll bring a light even into the darkest corners. In addition its sparkle heals”, Hagrid said. Harry watched the bird and its amazing wings. “Why you are here?” “Well errh… It’s very secret Hogwarts thing”, Hagrid said heavily. “Ok”, Harry ascertained. “We’ll see in the school”, Hagrid shouted and flew away with firebird. Harry closed the window and decided to put sleep. He should to be brisk in the morning because Uncle Vernon will wake him up too early just to tease Harry. Suddenly Harry saw something on his bed, which looked like a house-elf…
Kaunista aikamuotojen vaihtwlua... Ja sanojen käyttöä. EI, kyllä nauroin itteni ihan kuoiaaks, vieläki tyrskähtelen.... Jatka, jatkaihmeessä, täähän on ihanaa!
Vihje: älä käännä liian kirjaimellisesti sanakirjan avulla, noit jotkut sanat on ihan... kummallaisia yhteyksissään...