Olen aiivan katastrofi englannissa, eli auttakaa :D korjatkaa virheitä, joita on ERITTÄIN paljon.
My first date were unbelievable. I didn't stess what to dress up, cause i knew that robert loves me. SO i weared lowly, but stylish dress and red heels.We went in the glamorous restaurant, which eas really beautiful! We drank champagne and ate tasty steaks.
After that all, we went in the local pub. We danced on the floor all the time. When the evening was over he kissed me. He was so lovely beside me!
My first date were unbelievable. I didn't stess what to dress up, cause i knew that robert loves me. SO i weared lowly, but stylish dress and red heels.We went in the glamorous restaurant, which eas really beautiful! We drank champagne and ate tasty steaks.
After that all, we went in the local pub. We danced on the floor all the time. When the evening was over he kissed me. He was so lovely beside me!
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Sinähän vasta vaatimaton olet! Olet kirjoittanut sekä kieleltään että sisällöltään erinomaisen katkelman. Kunpa itse pystyisin samaan!